Wednesday, April 09, 2008

தேர்வு நேரக் கவிதை

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All of you, or atleast few of you know, that i would write some lines, thinking that they are poetic. So i did this work during my test hours for the past three years. But this last semester brought a difference. I have never captured by our college black cats and never stood before anyone regarding any matter. But now, a staff caught me in the exam hall with my tamil poem in my question paper. He complained about it in the office and i faced some problems due to that. They gave the question paper to me. I have all rights to write on it. Then please read the following lines and tell me what went wrong ?

என் பேனா முழுவதும் உன் காதலை நிரப்பி எழுதினேன்,
Paperல் முத்தமாய் நீ, மொத்தமாய் நீ.
என் நண்பர்கள் என்னை கேட்பதுண்டு,
ஏன் எப்பொழுதும் பெண்களைப் பற்றியே எழுதுகிறாய் என்று,
ஏனென்றால் பெண் தான் அழகு.
ஒவ்வொரு பெண்ணும் அழகு, தனித்தனி அழகு.
என்னைக் கவர்வது பெண் தான்.
நான் இது வரை சந்தித்த பெண்களில்,
நான் காதலிக்காத பெண்களே இல்லை.

I finished upto this line and that invigilator caught me. But the story continues like this.

என் தாய் முதல், அன்னை தெரசா முதல்,
இன்று நான் பழகும் என் தோழிகள் வரை.
என் காதல், வெறும் காதல் அல்ல, என் தவம்.
பெண் சமூகத்திர்க்காக நான் புரியும் தவம்.
பெண்கள் முன்னேர, ஆண்கள் தடையாக இருக்க முடியாது,
இருக்கவும் மாட்டார்கள்.
உங்களுக்குத் தேவை, சுதந்திரம் அல்ல,
சுத்ந்திரத்தில் தலையிடாமை. கவிதைகளையும் சேர்த்து.

பெண்மை பொலிவுர தேசம் மிளிரும்.....


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25 comments:

boobu said...

machi nee namba cultural la kavitha ezhudi irrukanum da...
hmmmmmmmm
ennama feel panni ezhudura da...

Mahesh said...

machi...rasanai illadha pasanga da..unna pudichunu poyitanunga...

"Adhavadhu kazhudhai mekira payyanukku ivlo arivanu avangalukku poramai da.. nee enna panre..
Thanjavur kalvettula idhai padhichittu pakkathuleye ukkandhukko..varungala sangadhiyar paathu padichu theliva nadandhupanga..."
Really nice da...last two lines punch..

Kavitha Jay said...

aiyoo..ennakku tamizh paddikka theriyathe pa..

Anonymous said...

nalla irundudhu da... :)
nee ippadi ellam kavidai ezhuduve nu ippo daan theriyudhu...
nejammave nalla irundudu da.. :)

nee nalla feel panni ezhudirke nu theriyudu!! :)

vasupradha said...

neeyae ezhudiniya illa bita?

ambica said...

hai eppadi oru talent unakulla eruku nu enaku edhu varaikum theriyama pochu!!!!!!!!!!!!

Epadi da exam hall ah utkandhu unaku epadi oru idea vandhathu........

adhuvum namma college la epadi oru kavithai.......

aana i will not forget that day da..

when we finished our exams and assembled in the class, only then we came to know that you were caught by the spy for writing poem in the question paper....

Office room kita balu unkita pesiturundha class la erundhu elarum korangu mathiri unnaae pathutu erunthom.............

Semma tension engaluku... aana nee free ah than erundha...

Santhosh kumar.S said...

nice one.... kaadhali muthal thaai varai unathu ennathai veli paduthi irukkirai......


some spelling mistakes..... just correct them

ViJaY said...

dei... 2nd half romba over da!!! MAnasatchi thottu sollu, unnoda kavidhai continuation adhu dhaana?? Naan Nambala!!!

Ponnarasi Kothandaraman said...

Good one... :) Kavithai ellam ezhuthuva'nu theriuyathey :> By the way..tag inaku eluthidren :D

Anonymous said...

thanks for ur tamil poem.just keep it up.

Anonymous said...

I am unable to read the following lines and Sorry for that I cant tell your wrong.

Anonymous said...

I can not read your writing cause it is written by your language. I think it was better if you translate the language in English. Anyway, Thanks for your Post!

Sori RAM said...

Hi machi.... thrilling post....

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Anu said...

hey nalla irundhudhu...
damn good kavithai raj..
i too write some scribbling kavithai like this....and to tel the truth, u ve impressed me with this one..Nice...
Keep posting!

Anonymous said...

It is hard to understand your language. Thanks for your post.

Uma said...

ஆஹா!
இப்படியே எல்லாரும் (esp men folk) நினைக்க ஆரம்ப்பிச்சுட்டா நாங்க 30% ஒதுக்கீடு கேட்கவே மாட்டோம்

Anonymous said...

It is not understandable. Thanks for your post.

Anonymous said...

I want to say about his language. I know that this language only use for his state. I have never captured by our college black cats and never stood before anyone regarding any matter. But now, a staff caught me in the exam hall with my tamil poem.

Anonymous said...

Its really a sad news but its funny too.

Anonymous said...

hey enna da..... exam haalla kuda ponna pathithaan nenapa unaka... vaazhga rajavin pen sevai..... machi aanulum nee ellathulayum escape aagurathuku saathagama amainthathu un moooooonjuthaan.
paal vadiyura madiri face cut but seirathellam mollamaarithanam..
(HEMA- the best single under the sky)

Anonymous said...

hi da raja this is your childhood friend janani
nanna ezhutra da.. very good.. keep going..

Raja Krishnan said...

@ Best Single - Hema

En ippadi ? im good at heart, athunala than im not getting into any problem.

Mollamarithanama ?
this is an unwanted statement irrelevant to the current situation.



@ Jana

Wow... I cant believe that u read my blog :)
Thanks a lot...

Unknown said...

Dear brother great pome. i never expect this from you... chance less.......

kumaran said...

nice anna... keep that up....

மதுரக்காரி said...

உங்களுக்குத் தேவை, சுதந்திரம் அல்ல,
சுத்ந்திரத்தில் தலையிடாமை////

nachu lines machi..... keep going....